SEOW WEI LUN 1001P76597 / WORK IN PROGRESS / COMPUTER APPLICATION 2
Great work, however, please find my comments as follow:Render 1: you could have used a longer width to show overall view of the building + site contextRender 2: Good composition but you should apply camera correction for straight verticles.Render 3: I am not sure what content/message you are trying ti convey. Perhaps not a good angle.Render 4: Again, you should use longer width.Render 5: Good oneOverall comment: good quality, clear WIP, could have used better compostition.
Thank you, I will try to improve on that... :D Have a nice day with a cup of coffee
Great work, however, please find my comments as follow:
ReplyDeleteRender 1: you could have used a longer width to show overall view of the building + site context
Render 2: Good composition but you should apply camera correction for straight verticles.
Render 3: I am not sure what content/message you are trying ti convey. Perhaps not a good angle.
Render 4: Again, you should use longer width.
Render 5: Good one
Overall comment: good quality, clear WIP, could have used better compostition.
Thank you, I will try to improve on that... :D Have a nice day with a cup of coffee
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